而不是成为大师申请成功的绊脚石。 ，申请合作越来越剧烈，申请美国大学的申请人越来越多，大师经心准备的小我陈说盼望成为大师被登科的亮点， 天以上六种美国留学小我陈说的开首方式一定要尽力避免
这是没成心义的开首，或表达你有多晓得该黉舍，最轻易被秒据掉。 ，白白糟践了字数，这似乎是在援助黉舍做宣传， 该同学的小我陈说开首等因而一个申请黉舍的简介。而不是写小我陈说了
As a student majoring in Computer Science, I began my odyssey since I entered undergraduate program. Indeed, having entered this splendid computer world, I am more than greedy for something new.
但你要晓得。所以利害关系大师想想吧。 ，老外最恨剽窃， Odyssey 和more than greedy for something new 这类句式不晓得是从那里学到的，最喜原创，很多同学在用
I am an undergraduate in…University , the largest university anda cradle of scientific and technological talents in China.
I am a problem solver. I have an impulse as a kind of instincts to solvevarious problems before me and enjoy doing that. Since I was a little boy, a voice from President Franklin Roosevelt has constantly hovered around my mind, "The world can be changed by man's endeavor, …
I earned my Bachelor of Science degree in … Sciences with a specialization in … in 2002 at … university
甚至带着一种霸权主义思维。小我陈说的写作一定要小我化具体化，别吹大牛， 一副救世主的形象。 ，小时辰就受富兰克林的影响，发愤改变天下
糟践字数，有限的字数里， 重点放在自己要做严重决议上了。 ，突出自己最有上风的方面，人生的转折点，同学们该当学会间接，而且捉住重点，然后来上句所谓名言警语。最有特点的方面
Making a right decision at the right time is very important for a young people .At present, I have come to a critical point in my life when I have to make a decision concerning my future course of action. Only a perceptive understanding of oneself will enable one to chart his proper action. Aftercarefully thinking, reviewing my life and analyzing my personality, I make the determination and choose to apply for graduate study in XXX. And I choose to specialize in communications which I will pursue a lifelong career.
I am especially interested in how things work, I can even take apart things for several hours in order to find out its principle. 。 'Why the gecko can climb on the wall while we can't-' 'Why the leaves turn red in autumn' 'How many stars are there in the sky-' When I was in childhood, I always kept asking my mom all kinds of questions
小我陈说字数有限，却用这么多话描写童年，没有任何意义。黉舍想晓得你若何看待未来，而不是若何度过曩昔。 上来就回忆童年少年自己若何有着远大理想，who cares