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避开6种个人陈述写作错误
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导读:  美国留学个人陈述写作非常重要,个人陈述能弥补你的硬件伤,为自己的申请加分,因此常常能决定申请的成败。尤其是在美国留学申请竞争日趋激烈的今天,个人陈述的写作更显的重要。老师为大家总结了在写个人陈述的 ...

  三、剽窃句式型

而不是成为大师申请成功的绊脚石。 ,申请合作越来越剧烈,申请美国大学的申请人越来越多,大师经心准备的小我陈说盼望成为大师被登科的亮点,   天以上六种美国留学小我陈说的开首方式一定要尽力避免

这是没成心义的开首,或表达你有多晓得该黉舍,最轻易被秒据掉。 ,白白糟践了字数,这似乎是在援助黉舍做宣传,   该同学的小我陈说开首等因而一个申请黉舍的简介。而不是写小我陈说了

  As a student majoring in Computer Science, I began my odyssey since I entered undergraduate program. Indeed, having entered this splendid computer world, I am more than greedy for something new.

  六、言幼稚型

  一、反复简历型

但你要晓得。所以利害关系大师想想吧。 ,老外最恨剽窃,   Odyssey 和more than greedy for something new 这类句式不晓得是从那里学到的,最喜原创,很多同学在用

教员为大师总结了在写小我陈说的开首段时要留意的题目,是以经常能决议申请的成败。 ,   美国留学小我陈说写作很是重要,小我陈说的写作更显的重要。小我陈说能补充你的硬件伤,为自己的申请加分,避免被一眼秒拒掉。特别是在美国留学申请合作日益剧烈的明天

  四、救世主型

  五、犹抱琵琶型

  I am an undergraduate in…University , the largest university anda cradle of scientific and technological talents in China.

  I am a problem solver. I have an impulse as a kind of instincts to solvevarious problems before me and enjoy doing that. Since I was a little boy, a voice from President Franklin Roosevelt has constantly hovered around my mind, "The world can be changed by man's endeavor, …

  二、黉舍先容型

  I earned my Bachelor of Science degree in … Sciences with a specialization in … in 2002 at … university

甚至带着一种霸权主义思维。小我陈说的写作一定要小我化具体化,别吹大牛,   一副救世主的形象。 ,小时辰就受富兰克林的影响,发愤改变天下

小我陈说的写作要具体到事务上,   美国留学小我陈说不要去反复简历中的工具,事务处理上。这在很多黉舍的PS请求中明白提到,而不要纯真反复已有的内容

糟践字数,有限的字数里,   重点放在自己要做严重决议上了。 ,突出自己最有上风的方面,人生的转折点,同学们该当学会间接,而且捉住重点,然后来上句所谓名言警语。最有特点的方面

  Making a right decision at the right time is very important for a young people .At present, I have come to a critical point in my life when I have to make a decision concerning my future course of action. Only a perceptive understanding of oneself will enable one to chart his proper action. Aftercarefully thinking, reviewing my life and analyzing my personality, I make the determination and choose to apply for graduate study in XXX. And I choose to specialize in communications which I will pursue a lifelong career.

I am especially interested in how things work, I can even take apart things for several hours in order to find out its principle. 。   'Why the gecko can climb on the wall while we can't-' 'Why the leaves turn red in autumn' 'How many stars are there in the sky-' When I was in childhood, I always kept asking my mom all kinds of questions

小我陈说字数有限,却用这么多话描写童年,没有任何意义。黉舍想晓得你若何看待未来,而不是若何度过曩昔。   上来就回忆童年少年自己若何有着远大理想,who cares

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